@ghostassasin81 You're not wrong there honestly

@ardoasms Yeah I know that; as was clarified in the post; I knew what would happen and just wanted to see how effective iwarrior was at raids as someone was bragging about it in chat earlier that day

@_Haxington_ Oh no; the reviewer has become the reviewed!

@_Haxington_ Oh no... the grammer... i.. must ... fix...

The recent raid on the play: BlazeDust what a shit name, came as quite a surprise, as two charming gentlemen, posed at reviewers, burst through the /tpa door of BlazeDust's most recent build.

What started off as a not quite so peaceful review, as the aspiring builder BlazeDust eagerly waited to review some feed back on his most recent build, quickly took a turn for the worst as the two reviewers hastily armed themselves and prepared to give the build's soon to be deceased owner, quite the not so shocking review.

What followed was one of the most violent and bloody reviews I have ever witnessed...
...As the tables quickly turned on the build owner: BlazeDust still a stupid name; The two assailants, now armed, drew their swords and cut down the now victim: BlazeDust that name is still stupid were he stood.

The nefarious raiding duo then proceeded to split into two teams; (can you have team of one?) one keeping the victim busy pressing the respawn button (and boosting their k/d ratio), and the other searching for any secrets, loot or other items of the shiny sort.
The execution of this split was done almost to perfection as the onlooking victim: BlazeDust just change your name already; witnessed, with horror, the demise of his new creation as it was torn down brick by brick in the search for shiny loot.

At this point the details become quite hard to ascertain, mainly due to amount of blood, guts and bone fragments flying about amidst the chaos; however the next reliable bit of information is the ransom demands from the troublesome duo's apparent raid leader, "Two stacks of diamond blocks or face the consequences!". The now subdued defender, knowing full well that he dose not has the required ransom, finally gives in to the chaos and with the quick reply of, "I'll take the consequences then"; settles in to watch the chaos unfold.

The next few minutes are quite... explosive one would say; needless to mention the build created by: BlazeDust even if you have to create a new account, just get rid of that name, is now little more then a smoking pile of smoldering ashes and charred wood.

Unfortunately the infamous duo refused inform me of their exact winnings, but I can inform you of some basics:

Diamonds - 1 Fatalities: 2 Collectors edition skeleton horses
Iron - 128-246 (depending on how much they blew up) A tonne of carrots and wheat
Redstone - 128-374 (also depending on how much they blew up)
Gold - 64 (see above)
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Rating-
-Review Usefulness
3/10 "Well... I mean... It was not so helpful... could have been a bit more constructive in all honesty"

-Mannerism
5/10 "Fairly rude and the 13'" steel blade did not add to the overall experience in a very positive way; however there was far
less shit talking in chat then expected"

-Professionalism
9.5/10 "While the overall process did not go as planned, the raid was done quite nicely, the 2nd person tpa was clean and neat.
The splitting up was almost seamless aside from that enderpearl you missed
The search and destroy part of the raid was also done quite nicely and the tnt placement was quite effective."

-Total
17.5/30 ( 58.3% B- )

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SCREENSHOTS
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Server Builds;

So I enjoy building and I think that I half decent at it; but I could defiantly do with some feed back, mainly so I can get better at building by learning from the feedback I receive (If I get any that is ;P).
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So I wanted to show off the beta stages of my first build on this server. (please be gentle)

Any feedback would be appreciated. :)

-Thanks; Blaze