Make - A - Monster

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  2. 7 years ago
    Edited 7 years ago by T0rsion

    Monster Name: B-Class Cyborg

    Physical description: humanoid figure, much larger than the average human. The B-Class is the second mechanical transplant of human consciousness to be utilized for combat. Consisting of soldiers who opted for the experiment after suffering loss of body functions due to various injuries, these cyborgs are the domineering forces of Earth's infantry. They share a communication disk in their brain that alerts them to any orders from HQ and possess some independence and creativity, which makes their assaults on the enemy open to diversity.

    Additional abilities: the body uses an advanced flexible lead core that grants immunity to radiation and also utilizes state of the art technology that makes them immune to explosions and hazardous gases.

    Weapons: brute force, Arsenal of weapons ranging from a standard infantry rifle to an advanced Davy Crockett style RPG depending on placement in the infantry. Nanobots ensure transmissions from the conscious "brain" are able to control the machine.

    Background details: After the ability to transfer consciousness from a body to a machine was discovered and made available to the military, the growing issue of injured veterans not being able to fight in war was solved by giving them a new body. After incredible successes with the A-Class Cyborgs, the B-Class was issued for everyone who opted to use them and met qualifications (exceptional skills in combat and injury that prohibits their use)

    Weakness: Acid attacks can destroy much of the cyborg mechanics, causing malfunctions that lead to immobilization and system failure. Radio transmissions can disrupt the nanobot signals, leading to system failure.

  3. Edited 7 years ago by hopping25

    Monster name/title: Herobright

    Physical description: Overview:A Wither-sized white bat-bug with glowing white eyes. Details: looking like a bright, white bat with a thick exoskeleton, moth-like antenna, A terror-inspiring screech, and bright, glowing eyes, this elusive creature is incredibly resilient and able to thrive in nearly every environment.

    Additional abilities: These beasts are as near omnipotent as possible without being Notch. Their (known) abilities from least to greatest:

    • While their speed has not been accurately measured, they are known to fly upwards faster than a person falling downwards and fly horizontally faster than rocket-powered Elytra flight
    • The thick exoskeleton grants them invulnerability to arrows while giving them health greater than the enderdragon.
    • The incredible strength of their wings means that they can shatter obsidian with one blow, allowing them to fly through solid blocks.
    • Their screams have been documented to petrify brave minecrafters with fear.
    • They have been documented to flash with white light not unlike a firefly while lighting arcs between their antenna for several seconds, somehow 'reprogramming' all living things in sight and causing their eyes to glow like the Herobright's eyes.

    There have been numerous other abilitys reported but have been inconsistently reported such as fire ball launching, lighting summoning, large scale TNT placement and lighting, lava summoning, teleportation, large scale control of environment without visible reason(storms, lights going out, noises, telekinesis, and other), mob summoning, ect.

    Background details:

    • Many believe that a Herobright-controlled player is the source of the legend of Herobrine.
    • Their ability to control seemingly everything and their changeable abilitys have lead to speculation that they are a sentient, self-programming virus that infected Minecraft before it's initial release.
    • There is no known way to kill a Herobright, several to hurt them, but no way to even bother it

    Weaknesses:

    • Not known to jump Minecraft worlds without controlling players, so quarantining infected worlds before you are reprogrammed seems to work, for now
    • said to be vulnerable in larva stage, which looks like a white silverfish.
  4. @Jordi223b Can they self replicate after feeding?
    If so, can a large enough group eat something the same size of the group, or they eat individualy?

    They eat individually and they replicate in special replication/construction pots in their bases

  5. @thegoldsmith remember guys this is still open to everyone i need more monsters for what im planning
    (if your stuck for an idea adapt a monster from a myth or legend that you know)

    what are you planning?

  6. Edited 7 years ago by thegoldsmith

    @hopping25 what are you planning?

    A series of books which i shall called the Bestiary which is a compilation of monsters, creatures and cryptids some of the monsters from this thread will be put into the books which i shall then publish at some point after my exams

  7. @thegoldsmith A series of books which i shall called the Bestiary which is a compilation of monsters, creatures and cryptids some of the monsters from this thread will be put into the books which i shall then publish at some point after my exams

    Nice, that gives me an idea...

  8. @thegoldsmith A series of books which i shall called the Bestiary which is a compilation of monsters, creatures and cryptids some of the monsters from this thread will be put into the books which i shall then publish at some point after my exams

    Forgotten publishing co. would like to join forces with gold publishing co. sneak peak: now writing up the intermediate guide to -craftymynes- (aka less important but cool and useful stuff)

  9. @TheForgotten20 Forgotten publishing co. would like to join forces with gold publishing co. sneak peak: now writing up the intermediate guide to -craftymynes- (aka less important but cool and useful stuff)

    We should call our joint venture the El Dorado Book Corporation.

  10. @thegoldsmith We should call our joint venture the El Dorado Book Corporation.

    k

  11. Edited 7 years ago by thegoldsmith

    for those who don't know El Dorado is a mythological forgotten city made out of gold

  12. *goes in MCEdit and replaces villages with gold blocks and sells map on windows 10 market thingy*

  13. This is still open for all. Anyone with a nightmare or terrifying beast of legend please let it be known.

  14. Edited 7 years ago by Carl_Sagan1

    @thegoldsmith This is still open for all. Anyone with a nightmare or terrifying beast of legend please let it be known.

    Is it okay that mine wasnt a terrifying monster and that it is neutral? although it can be terrifying in hostile mode.
    Also, who here can draw characters and 3D models?

  15. Edited 7 years ago by BoneChi11er

    Name: The Krragnar

    Physical traits: A dark shadow figure, that looks as if its made out of gas

    Abilities: It is able to phase through most objects and is not affected by physical contact. It can render itself invisible to most sources. One's health and mind will be affected negitively when near the Krragnar for long periods of time. Being near the Krragnar for 2 days at most offers mild side affects such as nausea, cramping, lower body temperature, and on rare cases mild paranioa. Being near the Krragnar for 3-7 days offers harsher side affects, such as vomiting, migrianes, lack of sleep, and black outs, on top of the symptoms previosly mentioned. During this time people affected also show symptoms of depression. Being near the Krragnar for 8-14 days offers severe side affects such as voices in ones head, imparred vision, tumors, malnutrition, and symptoms of insanity, on top of the symptoms previosly mentioned. People who are affected this long do not last.

    Background details: It attaches itself to the homes of different people, sapping the life energy out of any person indiscriminately to feed. This entity is not to be trifled with.

    Weaknesses: The Krragnar can be seen through certian devices occasionly, the most consistent device being a thermal reader. The radius of which one would feel side affects is relitively small, being only 50ft, give or take. An offering can be made to banish the entity from one's home by adding to a fire;

    • one drop of the home-owner's blood
    • a rose petal
    • a pinch of sage

    These offerings must be wrapped in a paper that contains the person's wishes to banish the Krragnar from the home. The Krragnar cannot phase through lead or graveyards, the reasons being unkown.

    Drawing (not my artwork):
    -image-

  16. Also, it feels like were making a bunch of SCP's

  17. @BoneChi11er Also, it feels like were making a bunch of SCP's

    what's that mean?

  18. @Carl_Sagan1 what's that mean?

    Ever heard of Google?

  19. @Carl_Sagan1 Is it okay that mine wasnt a terrifying monster and that it is neutral? although it can be terrifying in hostile mode.
    Also, who here can draw characters and 3D models?

    Really doesn't matter but the scary ones will be more fun to right about (but yours is very details so it will be fun getting into the book.)

  20. @BoneChi11er Also, it feels like were making a bunch of SCP's

    nah this is more of a contest to see who can create beasts and monsters well enough to be put into my bestiary.

  21. Edited 7 years ago by BoneChi11er

    You're making a bestiary? How many monster do you have?

  22. 7 years ago

    @BoneChi11er You're making a bestiary? How many monster do you have?

    not including the ones one here ive decided on 20

  23. cool, let us know when its ready plz

  24. @BoneChi11er cool, let us know when its ready plz

    probably end of next month (exams finish then)

  25. This is still going if you can think of more than one monster feel free to share

  26. @thegoldsmith probably end of next month (exams finish then)

    I will join just let me deal with school too, a couple of weeks and school will ease.

  27. @GrinningBobcat I will join just let me deal with school too, a couple of weeks and school will ease.

    sure take your time school doesnt calm down for a few weeks on my end too.

  28. @thegoldsmith sure take your time school doesnt calm down for a few weeks on my end too.

    thnx

  29. Edited 7 years ago by Abbasilol

    Monster Name: The Reapers

    Physical description: Humanoid Ghostly Undead, Crew of the most power pirate in the history, Bael!, they are 16 crew members with captain, entirly 17 ppl are on the Ghostly Ship, they have forms depending on how they died, Some of them are skeletons, some of them ghouls, and some of them Undead(Half flesh half bone). Captain Bael is a skeleton, with his famous captain hat, and nothing else but a rusty old sword and a gun and a pipe.BUT they are not physical, they are all ghosts, in the shape of skeleton, ghoul and undead. and their ship and ALL Of their tools, is ghost too!, also they glow in one light, and the color of light changes with seasons, they glow Purple in automn, White in winter, Green in spring, and Yellow in summer. the name of their ship is Angel of Death.

    Additional abilities: they are not affected by ANY physical or even magical powers and stuff, they possess the power of death, only something dat possess death can affect them. their tools are ghost too, so they are not affected by anything, witch means their sword will just simply cut any mortal structure, and their bullets too,and their cannons ofc... . bullets are not affected by gravity or air, so they never stop going, when they shoot, the bullet will go on until it passes the atmosphere of earth and will go on forever in the void. their guns ammo is limitless and they dont even need to reload. they can slowly fly through the air, up and down, moving toward walls and stuff like regular ghosts, and their ship flies in the sky, they are invisible in the night to mortal beings, and cannot come outside in daylight, they`ll go to dephs of the earth beneath the oceans in their huge caves with all of the treasures of the history in it.
    They feast on nightmares, in night they`ll come out flying above cities, visiting houses and seeking ppl who are sleeping, and seeing a nightmare, to them, there is a dark cloud around the head of victim, they gather it into their ghoustly rusty ol` bottles`o`rum, and when its close to sunrise, they`ll go to the caves below and will drink and dance and laugh and tell jokes and stories to each other. gathering the Dark cloud will cause Hallucination in nights to the victim, hearing evil laughters of the dead, worst nightmares for a while, and sometimes for weak mortals, even death, they just simply wont wake up. while gathering the Dark cloud, the nightmare of that person will be at its height. They also can Use *Call of the seven Seas* every 100 year, you can see what it is below.

    Weaknesses: they will starve if they run out of Dark cloud rums,they are weak to those who possess the power death, they`ll be just humans with old rusty weapons to them. they are very passive and stubborn, they are afraid of daylight and will be blind in daylight.

    I liked yer idea Goldie :) , sry im busy these days, but i liked to post one of my monsters here, sry its long i know, thx for reading.

  30. Background Details:(Optional, Nerds Only)
    Background details (optional): they are cursed to live in the world of the living while they are dead, when their brethren are resting in the realm of dead.
    Once archangel of beauty considered them as ugly worthless beings, and a disgrace to the world, so she decided to destroy them, she went to the archangel of death and asked for help.
    later on archangels noticed they cannot fight them in day since they are in their den, and they cannon find them too since they are not fresh souls to reap for archangel of death, or living beings visible to archangel of beauty, and if they wanted to fight themselves, it was a risk, archangels were too imortant and what if humans see them ? so they decided to create an army of angels of death, with power of death, similar to The Reapers themselves.
    they made a shadowy armada with angels of death as its crew, it had thousands of glorious ships, power, advanced and infused with the power of death.
    they marched earth on night so they were invisible to mortals, When Bael saw this, he knew the Reapers have no chance againts angels armada, so they Went to the Horn of the seven seas, what could only be used once a century, it could call all of his brethren from the realm of the dead for 13 days, they blew into the horn when the Angel`s armada were visible in the horizon in a rainy night, the Pirate fleet rose from the earth, all of the pirates of the history, Including davy Jones, Me(Jacksparrow), barbarosa etc. they flew up near the Bael, angels were shocked, a great battle were going to happen.
    Fleets crashed into each other, cannons firing, swords tilting,angels flying around, some of them getting shot by gunslingers like how a hunter shoots a bird. but still the pirate fleet were weaker, angels were powerful, mighty beings, when they were only humans to them since the angels possessed the power of death too, and their swords were rusty and old, not so useful againts advanced angelic armor. they were loosing the war, angels were trempling over the pirates, Bael, desperate, got a great idea, he went to Davy jones, asked him to realease the Kraken!
    So they did, Ghost of the Kraken Rose from the ocean below them, and this time, he was not going to scare ppl, it was a war, he attacked with brute and unstopable force, Crushing the Angel armada, Pirates Hoorayed in happiness and rallied, they were winning, and so they did.
    Archangels, watching from distance, realised their defeat, and their mistake of being so prideful, so they returned to where they came from.
    Pirates, went to the Wailing cavrens below, and celebrated for 12 days until the Bael`s brethren had to leave, they said their goodbyes, but this time, when they were leaving, Bael told dat he will make a way to realese everyone from being trapped in one realm, wheter the dead or alive.(This event happend 210 years ago from now, So, Bael already made an attempt to Open a permenant between realm of dead and living but his mission failed, so he waited another century, planning for second mission... dat is going to happen anytime...)

  31. @Abbasilol thanks for the great amount of monsters, amazing detail (can i ask how long have you been sitting on this one or did it just come off the top of your head)

  32. Monster name/title: "Grimcy"

    Physical description: A demon formed from a casting spell, Most people, without taking a second glimpse may mistake him for Pimpcy. However this entity has taken hold of her appearance with very different traits and a distinct look up close. Instead of the bright pink eyes, his eyes are a vivid purple that seem to pierce even A foggy swamp biome. Both Pimpcy and Grimcy have different colored camellia flowers covering and growing over their eye opposite of one another. It's part of the spell which bounds them to each other and cannot be removed until the spell is broken. His clothes are of a different outfit but still contain the same fashion as Pimpcy's. His body is like a better built male version of hers too with skin appearing as a pale flushed gray.

    Additional abilities: A majority of the time he uses his translucent appearance lurking Swamp or various types of forest biomes if not bothering Pimpcy. Living, thriving, and waiting for a specific challenge. When entering near where he looms they say feelings of discomfort wash over and unnerving vibes kick in. The more you linger the more you feel tightly griping your rope of sanity.
    Can teleport, appear from thin air, He can attack, he can kill, and he can harm with a possessed sword in his hand charged with the same spell imprisoning him to live half human. Gashes and wounds heal badly when the sword is used and can take up to months healing time if the victim lives.

    Background details (optional): One night, upon rummaging through old enchanted books, Pimpcy thought she had found one particular old book consisting of new spells to enchant items. This book had been buried deep in an abandoned shrine thought of have been built by a normal player on the server. The readings seemed similar to the normal book enchantment symbols yet they were strangely off and a different ink was used on the worn pages. A huge mistake took advantage of the situation when Pimpcy placed this book on an enchantment table pronouncing the phrases slowly to herself.

    Weaknesses: Due to his curse of being Half human, he cannot be freed until the spell is broken with Pimpcy's doing. Otherwise he's vulnerable to death and is no longer immortal.
    That being said he attacks twice as hard and is always on his ground if threatened to ensure others of their place.

    Drawing (also optional):

    -image-

  33. @Pimpcy Monster name/title: "Grimcy"

    Physical description: A demon formed from a casting spell, Most people, without taking a second glimpse may mistake him for Pimpcy. However this entity has taken hold of her appearance with very different traits and a distinct look up close. Instead of the bright pink eyes, his eyes are a vivid purple that seem to pierce even A foggy swamp biome. Both Pimpcy and Grimcy have different colored camellia flowers covering and growing over their eye opposite of one another. It's part of the spell which bounds them to each other and cannot be removed until the spell is broken. His clothes are of a different outfit but still contain the same fashion as Pimpcy's. His body is like a better built male version of hers too with skin appearing as a pale flushed gray.

    Additional abilities: A majority of the time he uses his translucent appearance lurking Swamp or various types of forest biomes if not bothering Pimpcy. Living, thriving, and waiting for a specific challenge. When entering near where he looms they say feelings of discomfort wash over and unnerving vibes kick in. The more you linger the more you feel tightly griping your rope of sanity.
    Can teleport, appear from thin air, He can attack, he can kill, and he can harm with a possessed sword in his hand charged with the same spell imprisoning him to live half human. Gashes and wounds heal badly when the sword is used and can take up to months healing time if the victim lives.

    Background details (optional): One night, upon rummaging through old enchanted books, Pimpcy thought she had found one particular old book consisting of new spells to enchant items. This book had been buried deep in an abandoned shrine thought of have been built by a normal player on the server. The readings seemed similar to the normal book enchantment symbols yet they were strangely off and a different ink was used on the worn pages. A huge mistake took advantage of the situation when Pimpcy placed this book on an enchantment table pronouncing the phrases slowly to herself.

    Weaknesses: Due to his curse of being Half human, he cannot be freed until the spell is broken with Pimpcy's doing. Otherwise he's vulnerable to death and is no longer immortal.
    That being said he attacks twice as hard and is always on his ground if threatened to ensure others of their place.

    Drawing (also optional):

    -image-

    11/10 will kiss to break the spell

  34. @Pimpcy Monster name/title: "Grimcy"

    Physical description: A demon formed from a casting spell, Most people, without taking a second glimpse may mistake him for Pimpcy. However this entity has taken hold of her appearance with very different traits and a distinct look up close. Instead of the bright pink eyes, his eyes are a vivid purple that seem to pierce even A foggy swamp biome. Both Pimpcy and Grimcy have different colored camellia flowers covering and growing over their eye opposite of one another. It's part of the spell which bounds them to each other and cannot be removed until the spell is broken. His clothes are of a different outfit but still contain the same fashion as Pimpcy's. His body is like a better built male version of hers too with skin appearing as a pale flushed gray.

    Additional abilities: A majority of the time he uses his translucent appearance lurking Swamp or various types of forest biomes if not bothering Pimpcy. Living, thriving, and waiting for a specific challenge. When entering near where he looms they say feelings of discomfort wash over and unnerving vibes kick in. The more you linger the more you feel tightly griping your rope of sanity.
    Can teleport, appear from thin air, He can attack, he can kill, and he can harm with a possessed sword in his hand charged with the same spell imprisoning him to live half human. Gashes and wounds heal badly when the sword is used and can take up to months healing time if the victim lives.

    Background details (optional): One night, upon rummaging through old enchanted books, Pimpcy thought she had found one particular old book consisting of new spells to enchant items. This book had been buried deep in an abandoned shrine thought of have been built by a normal player on the server. The readings seemed similar to the normal book enchantment symbols yet they were strangely off and a different ink was used on the worn pages. A huge mistake took advantage of the situation when Pimpcy placed this book on an enchantment table pronouncing the phrases slowly to herself.

    Weaknesses: Due to his curse of being Half human, he cannot be freed until the spell is broken with Pimpcy's doing. Otherwise he's vulnerable to death and is no longer immortal.
    That being said he attacks twice as hard and is always on his ground if threatened to ensure others of their place.

    Drawing (also optional):

    -image-

    Nice :D. can i convince you to draw a couple of the other monsters in the thread please ?

  35. if you guys can come up with more than one monster please put them all up. it doesnt have to be an entirly new idea you can put up a vartiation of a myth or folklore creature youve heard of like the SeaPanther, the Roc or the Buggane.

  36. Monster name/title: Algebra Homework

    Physical description: It appears to be no more than a sheet of paper, but it is a very real threat.

    Additional abilities: Only certain people see this for what it is. Millions of children are forced by their teachers to interact with this monster, giving it a chance to suck out some of their victim's life force. After they do that, they fill their brain with useless information that they may never use.

    Background details (optional): They do not reproduce like normal creatures. They are usually different, and they come from different machines. They are not really alive until they begin to suck out the life force of someone.

    Weaknesses: They are easily defeated, they can be torn, shredded, or burned.

    Drawing (also optional): It is to horrible for mortals to look upon.

  37. Though I do my homework on my computer, so it does not affect me, unless I have to do it on paper.

  38. Sry for late answer goldie, thx, and it just popped up in my mind :)

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