Wish i could, but my base was reset a while ago, and with it, the book

oh, didn't see your edit @jamlbon
here's the start of my first one

I originally started writing it as a script or a graphic novel, but never got to that point

As for my other story i'm currently working on, this on is written to be read as a regular book, so it's written in a more descriptive mannor

Thanks, i enjoyed yours too.

You managed to read all that already? GG

@argonFiles I once tried to write a book, it didn't work.. it was about a corporation enslaving everyone on some planet

sounds a lot like battlefield earth, the book is much much better than the movie

@ardoasms sounds a lot like battlefield earth, the book is much much better than the movie

I've read the book, pretty good even with the guy who wrote it xD

X3 i could say the same or reminding me of the game

@_UNDRSCRE_ I wrote an 14-page short story adaptation of the first fallout game. it was pretty darn fun. I've been thinking of expanding it as it was an absolute joy to write. it was a bit crummy, as I wrote it all in one go, so I will probably revise it one of these days. Maybe even make another one for fallout 2.

Here it is, please keep in mind that English isn't my first language and I never did really edit it so no hate pls!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18EQryijBbj_0XJV_2PkTepRXU5B1pARgv9adJC0dfe8/edit?usp=sharing

(please keep in mind this was supposed to be an extended edition of the vault dweller's memoirs, so many strings of dialogue and excerpts from the memoirs were used!)

@_UNDRSCRE_ I wrote an 14-page short story adaptation of the first fallout game. it was pretty darn fun. I've been thinking of expanding it as it was an absolute joy to write. it was a bit crummy, as I wrote it all in one go, so I will probably revise it one of these days. Maybe even make another one for fallout 2.

Here it is, please keep in mind that English isn't my first language and I never did really edit it so no hate pls!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18EQryijBbj_0XJV_2PkTepRXU5B1pARgv9adJC0dfe8/edit?usp=sharing

(please keep in mind this was supposed to be an extended edition of the vault dweller's memoirs, so many strings of dialogue and excerpts from the memoirs were used!)

the story is great but you need to "show not tell"

e.g. your saying things like i live in vault 13 with rats instead of something like the place stunk of rat poo.............................in order to protect the place from the danerous gamma rays even the fingers of light were not allowed to reach us..............This is the filth we live in, this is vault 13. (each .............means use at another location, these are just other examples) but fretty good for an english second langauge

can i edit it for you on office word then send it to you?

le bump

Its from my inquiries on server :P

I've been in school for eight years to become an editor and author. I've written many stories in several different genres. This semester alone I have to write a 60 page collection of short stories :)

Most of my stuff is saved on flash drives, but I suppose I could post some of my more recent items at some point soon ^^

i need to find some o my dad's ol creative writing papers