Make - A - Monster

  1. 7 years ago
    Edited 7 years ago by thegoldsmith

    Hey guys, sorry Ive not been on recently (exam season) im killing some rare spare time here and setting up a creative challenge.
    basically like the title says you make a monster not necessarily for minecraft. all you do is write a description of your monster in the format below and compare it to other peoples monsters. obviously no vulgar or rude comments about other peoples monsters or any vulgar or rude monsters as well.

    Format
    Monster name/title:

    Physical description:

    Additional abilities:

    Background details (optional):

    Weaknesses:

    Drawing (also optional):

    Cant wait to see what you guys come up with :D

  2. Edited 7 years ago by thegoldsmith

    Just to start things off
    Monster name:
    Phantomite

    Physical description:
    A giant spider/elephant cross (eight elephant legs). with three elephant heads each with 16 poisonous tusks running down their trunks and eight eyes on each.

    Additional abilities:
    Highly venomous with its poison coating its tusks and in its saliva poison can be absorbed through skin
    Extremely strong (elephant muscles)
    Highly mobile inc wall crawling (spider....stuff)

    Background Details:
    It roams the plains and jungles ever searching for a insects large enough to eat. but overall a friendly creature that shows its affection by running its tusks over people.

    Weakness:
    Scared of:
    Small mice and large boots

  3. Monster name/title:Barons' Bashers

    Physical description:Humanoid shaped. Large head, large nose, Often find them wearing tattered clothing. Their skin is a sunken grey, conditions after years of working in the shadows. The only sound they make is a grunting noise when they attack, or are attacked.

    Additional abilities: Super human speed, Strength and an ability to locate a target through walls.
    Extreme trackers, once they catch wind of a human, they will not stop untill the human has been killed.
    They have no concept of fear and will attack anyone they see.
    Their weapon of choice is an ax imbued with magical properties, further heightening their already formidable skills.

    Background details (optional): BaronBattleBreads personal creation, they serve as assassins for the unwanted members of society. While they are only deployed against miscreants, they have no concept of target and will murder any humans within their vicinity.

    Weakness: While resistant to physical blows, they are weary of magic users. They develop a discomfort in water as it messes with their ability to locate humans, and have a longstanding hatred with flight. They simply refuse to learn, a belief that their speed on the ground is still superior.

  4. @BaronBattleBread Monster name/title:Barons' Bashers

    Physical description:Humanoid shaped. Large head, large nose, Often find them wearing tattered clothing. Their skin is a sunken grey, conditions after years of working in the shadows. The only sound they make is a grunting noise when they attack, or are attacked.

    Additional abilities: Super human speed, Strength and an ability to locate a target through walls.
    Extreme trackers, once they catch wind of a human, they will not stop untill the human has been killed.
    They have no concept of fear and will attack anyone they see.
    Their weapon of choice is an ax imbued with magical properties, further heightening their already formidable skills.

    Background details (optional): BaronBattleBreads personal creation, they serve as assassins for the unwanted members of society. While they are only deployed against miscreants, they have no concept of target and will murder any humans within their vicinity.

    Weakness: While resistant to physical blows, they are weary of magic users. They develop a discomfort in water as it messes with their ability to locate humans, and have a longstanding hatred with flight. They simply refuse to learn, a belief that their speed on the ground is still superior.

    how would they fare against a raging Phantomite?

  5. Edited 7 years ago by BaronBattleBread

    @thegoldsmith how would they fare against a raging Phantomite?

    Seeing as your guy is scared of large boots (my guys have feet) and mine carry an ax and have no concept of fear.. id say that in a 1v1, my guy would win initially, but might succumb to the poison after.

    I say this because my monsters dont kill anything but humans, unless provoked. So your friendly poison bug would have to have started the altercation with its venom.

  6. If i had free time i would try to draw both of your characters :/

  7. I'm totally doing this!

  8. @Pimpcy I'm totally doing this!

    make one for me because im tired and busy please. they could be friends or twins or murder buddies or a two headed ogre

  9. Remember Guys this thing is open to absolutely everyone please make a monster

  10. @thegoldsmith Remember Guys this thing is open to absolutely everyone please make a monster

    Please!! i want to read about crazy things that dissapear and melt into puddles and are the stuff of nightmares

  11. Monster name/title: golddigger

    Physical description: it looks like an overbuffed crocodile. It has a very good bite and a strong tail whip for those who dare come close. Its stomach acids are very strong and so it has learnt to aim a large ball of highly strong acid capable of melting through a prison in mere minutes. It also has a ranged attack in that it can whip its tail around and use the spikes attached to it to fling onto its enemies. The spikes are made similar to our nails. Should the spikes penetrate the armour of the enemy its poison tip can quickly finish them off. It has great armour that even modern HEAT and APDS shells cannot penetrate.

    Additional abilities: it swims and runs fast

    Background details (optional):
    the crocodile was a result of one of crafty's pvp arena experiments. Unfortunately it escaped and the citizens of CM could not mobilise in time to stop it from escaping into the wild (ofc the people at spawn were afk as usual) and now it hunts anyone it finds.
    Weaknesses:
    The crocodile's ranged attacks are not very accurate and it is often too obsessed with mining gold to get the first hit on its enemies. It is also sensitive to gasses .
    Drawing (also optional):

  12. @TheForgotten20 Monster name/title: golddigger

    Physical description: it looks like an overbuffed crocodile. It has a very good bite and a strong tail whip for those who dare come close. Its stomach acids are very strong and so it has learnt to aim a large ball of highly strong acid capable of melting through a prison in mere minutes. It also has a ranged attack in that it can whip its tail around and use the spikes attached to it to fling onto its enemies. The spikes are made similar to our nails. Should the spikes penetrate the armour of the enemy its poison tip can quickly finish them off. It has great armour that even modern HEAT and APDS shells cannot penetrate.

    Additional abilities: it swims and runs fast

    Background details (optional):
    the crocodile was a result of one of crafty's pvp arena experiments. Unfortunately it escaped and the citizens of CM could not mobilise in time to stop it from escaping into the wild (ofc the people at spawn were afk as usual) and now it hunts anyone it finds.
    Weaknesses:
    The crocodile's ranged attacks are not very accurate and it is often too obsessed with mining gold to get the first hit on its enemies. It is also sensitive to gasses .
    Drawing (also optional):

    nice one explains why i never find much gold ore

  13. Edited 7 years ago by just_a_penguin

    Name: D'yavol'skaya Sobaka

    Physical Description: Large, black dog, around 1 metre tall while on all 4 legs, with huge, powerful fangs. Glowing red eyes protruding from all over its body, alongside missing chunks of flesh.

    Additional Abilities: Super fast and strong, and runs on only its hind legs, but can also turn into smoke.

    Background Details: No known origin, first sighted close to Novosibirsk in the late 1890's. After the first sighting, the number of missing cases grew, then spotted again in Zheleznogorsk in the late 1950's, and recently sighted in Solntsevo Moskva. Known to feed only on humans, and prefers industrial places or places with a high population.

    Weakness: Anything that would kill a regular dog can kill it, the problem is trying to be as fast as it.

  14. @just_a_penguin Name: D'yavol'skaya Sobaka

    Physical Description: Large, black dog, around 1 metre tall while on all 4 legs, with huge, powerful fangs. Glowing red eyes protruding from all over its body, alongside missing chunks of flesh.

    Additional Abilities: Super fast and strong, and runs on only its hide legs, but can also turn into smoke.

    Background Details: No known origin, first sighted close to Novosibirsk in the late 1890's. After the first sighting, the number of missing cases grew, then spotted again in Zheleznogorsk in the late 1950's, and recently sighted in Solntsevo Moskva. Known to feed only on humans, and prefers industrial places or places with a high population.

    Weakness: Anything that would kill a regular dog can kill it, the problem is trying to be as fast as it.

    Why do i have to be as fast as it? ill just coat myself in chocolate :D

  15. Edited 7 years ago by BaronBattleBread

    @BaronBattleBread Why do i have to be as fast as it? ill just coat myself in chocolate :D

    should work, except you know the whole being eaten part that might sting a little

  16. @thegoldsmith should work, except you know the whole being eaten part that might sting a little

    The dang this is fast enough i cant outrun it and likely strong enough that i cant outpower it. Ill be dammed if i dont take it with me when it kills me XD

  17. @BaronBattleBread The dang this is fast enough i cant outrun it and likely strong enough that i cant outpower it. Ill be dammed if i dont take it with me when it kills me XD

    fair enough

  18. remember guys this is still open to everyone i need more monsters for what im planning
    (if your stuck for an idea adapt a monster from a myth or legend that you know)

  19. Edited 7 years ago by Carl_Sagan1

    Monster name/title: Nano bots

    Physical description: Small tiny intelligent organized autonomous semi organic robots (unknown metal+unknown organic material).They have formed colonies under ground and in the seas, they can swim, fly and move through rocky terrain easily. Their intent is unknown and they seem to be neutral. They can scan and detect all signs of life and movements kilometers away and they can take defensive measures if needed.

    Additional abilities: They are linked to each other with advanced technology so communication is very easy. they can move in swarms or individually. they feed on anything after decomposing it into small molecules.

    Weapons: Sonic, Ionic, electric forces

    Background details (optional): They have came from outer space and crash landed somewhere unknown.

    Weaknesses: Extreme heat can disrupt their communication and function

  20. Edited 7 years ago by MisterReco

    @Carl_Sagan1 Monster name/title: Nano bots

    Physical description: Small tiny intelligent organized autonomous semi organic robots (unknown metal+unknown organic material).They have formed colonies under ground and in the seas, they can swim, fly and move through rocky terrain easily. Their intent is unknown and they seem to be neutral. When they can detect all signs movements kilometers away and they can take defensive measures if needed.

    Additional abilities: They are linked to each other with advanced technology so communication is very easy. they can move in swarms or individually. they feed on anything after decomposing it.

    Weapons: Sonic, Ionic, electric forces

    Background details (optional): They have came from outer space and crash landed somewhere unknown.

    Weaknesses: Extreme heat can disrupt their communication and function

    Can they self replicate after feeding?
    If so, can a large enough group eat something the same size of the group, or they eat individualy?

  21. 7 years ago
    Edited 7 years ago by T0rsion

    Monster Name: B-Class Cyborg

    Physical description: humanoid figure, much larger than the average human. The B-Class is the second mechanical transplant of human consciousness to be utilized for combat. Consisting of soldiers who opted for the experiment after suffering loss of body functions due to various injuries, these cyborgs are the domineering forces of Earth's infantry. They share a communication disk in their brain that alerts them to any orders from HQ and possess some independence and creativity, which makes their assaults on the enemy open to diversity.

    Additional abilities: the body uses an advanced flexible lead core that grants immunity to radiation and also utilizes state of the art technology that makes them immune to explosions and hazardous gases.

    Weapons: brute force, Arsenal of weapons ranging from a standard infantry rifle to an advanced Davy Crockett style RPG depending on placement in the infantry. Nanobots ensure transmissions from the conscious "brain" are able to control the machine.

    Background details: After the ability to transfer consciousness from a body to a machine was discovered and made available to the military, the growing issue of injured veterans not being able to fight in war was solved by giving them a new body. After incredible successes with the A-Class Cyborgs, the B-Class was issued for everyone who opted to use them and met qualifications (exceptional skills in combat and injury that prohibits their use)

    Weakness: Acid attacks can destroy much of the cyborg mechanics, causing malfunctions that lead to immobilization and system failure. Radio transmissions can disrupt the nanobot signals, leading to system failure.

  22. Edited 7 years ago by hopping25

    Monster name/title: Herobright

    Physical description: Overview:A Wither-sized white bat-bug with glowing white eyes. Details: looking like a bright, white bat with a thick exoskeleton, moth-like antenna, A terror-inspiring screech, and bright, glowing eyes, this elusive creature is incredibly resilient and able to thrive in nearly every environment.

    Additional abilities: These beasts are as near omnipotent as possible without being Notch. Their (known) abilities from least to greatest:

    • While their speed has not been accurately measured, they are known to fly upwards faster than a person falling downwards and fly horizontally faster than rocket-powered Elytra flight
    • The thick exoskeleton grants them invulnerability to arrows while giving them health greater than the enderdragon.
    • The incredible strength of their wings means that they can shatter obsidian with one blow, allowing them to fly through solid blocks.
    • Their screams have been documented to petrify brave minecrafters with fear.
    • They have been documented to flash with white light not unlike a firefly while lighting arcs between their antenna for several seconds, somehow 'reprogramming' all living things in sight and causing their eyes to glow like the Herobright's eyes.

    There have been numerous other abilitys reported but have been inconsistently reported such as fire ball launching, lighting summoning, large scale TNT placement and lighting, lava summoning, teleportation, large scale control of environment without visible reason(storms, lights going out, noises, telekinesis, and other), mob summoning, ect.

    Background details:

    • Many believe that a Herobright-controlled player is the source of the legend of Herobrine.
    • Their ability to control seemingly everything and their changeable abilitys have lead to speculation that they are a sentient, self-programming virus that infected Minecraft before it's initial release.
    • There is no known way to kill a Herobright, several to hurt them, but no way to even bother it

    Weaknesses:

    • Not known to jump Minecraft worlds without controlling players, so quarantining infected worlds before you are reprogrammed seems to work, for now
    • said to be vulnerable in larva stage, which looks like a white silverfish.
  23. @Jordi223b Can they self replicate after feeding?
    If so, can a large enough group eat something the same size of the group, or they eat individualy?

    They eat individually and they replicate in special replication/construction pots in their bases

  24. @thegoldsmith remember guys this is still open to everyone i need more monsters for what im planning
    (if your stuck for an idea adapt a monster from a myth or legend that you know)

    what are you planning?

  25. Edited 7 years ago by thegoldsmith

    @hopping25 what are you planning?

    A series of books which i shall called the Bestiary which is a compilation of monsters, creatures and cryptids some of the monsters from this thread will be put into the books which i shall then publish at some point after my exams

  26. @thegoldsmith A series of books which i shall called the Bestiary which is a compilation of monsters, creatures and cryptids some of the monsters from this thread will be put into the books which i shall then publish at some point after my exams

    Nice, that gives me an idea...

  27. @thegoldsmith A series of books which i shall called the Bestiary which is a compilation of monsters, creatures and cryptids some of the monsters from this thread will be put into the books which i shall then publish at some point after my exams

    Forgotten publishing co. would like to join forces with gold publishing co. sneak peak: now writing up the intermediate guide to -craftymynes- (aka less important but cool and useful stuff)

  28. @TheForgotten20 Forgotten publishing co. would like to join forces with gold publishing co. sneak peak: now writing up the intermediate guide to -craftymynes- (aka less important but cool and useful stuff)

    We should call our joint venture the El Dorado Book Corporation.

  29. @thegoldsmith We should call our joint venture the El Dorado Book Corporation.

    k

  30. Edited 7 years ago by thegoldsmith

    for those who don't know El Dorado is a mythological forgotten city made out of gold

  31. *goes in MCEdit and replaces villages with gold blocks and sells map on windows 10 market thingy*

  32. This is still open for all. Anyone with a nightmare or terrifying beast of legend please let it be known.

  33. Edited 7 years ago by Carl_Sagan1

    @thegoldsmith This is still open for all. Anyone with a nightmare or terrifying beast of legend please let it be known.

    Is it okay that mine wasnt a terrifying monster and that it is neutral? although it can be terrifying in hostile mode.
    Also, who here can draw characters and 3D models?

  34. Edited 7 years ago by BoneChi11er

    Name: The Krragnar

    Physical traits: A dark shadow figure, that looks as if its made out of gas

    Abilities: It is able to phase through most objects and is not affected by physical contact. It can render itself invisible to most sources. One's health and mind will be affected negitively when near the Krragnar for long periods of time. Being near the Krragnar for 2 days at most offers mild side affects such as nausea, cramping, lower body temperature, and on rare cases mild paranioa. Being near the Krragnar for 3-7 days offers harsher side affects, such as vomiting, migrianes, lack of sleep, and black outs, on top of the symptoms previosly mentioned. During this time people affected also show symptoms of depression. Being near the Krragnar for 8-14 days offers severe side affects such as voices in ones head, imparred vision, tumors, malnutrition, and symptoms of insanity, on top of the symptoms previosly mentioned. People who are affected this long do not last.

    Background details: It attaches itself to the homes of different people, sapping the life energy out of any person indiscriminately to feed. This entity is not to be trifled with.

    Weaknesses: The Krragnar can be seen through certian devices occasionly, the most consistent device being a thermal reader. The radius of which one would feel side affects is relitively small, being only 50ft, give or take. An offering can be made to banish the entity from one's home by adding to a fire;

    • one drop of the home-owner's blood
    • a rose petal
    • a pinch of sage

    These offerings must be wrapped in a paper that contains the person's wishes to banish the Krragnar from the home. The Krragnar cannot phase through lead or graveyards, the reasons being unkown.

    Drawing (not my artwork):
    -image-

  35. Also, it feels like were making a bunch of SCP's

  36. @BoneChi11er Also, it feels like were making a bunch of SCP's

    what's that mean?

  37. @Carl_Sagan1 what's that mean?

    Ever heard of Google?

  38. @Carl_Sagan1 Is it okay that mine wasnt a terrifying monster and that it is neutral? although it can be terrifying in hostile mode.
    Also, who here can draw characters and 3D models?

    Really doesn't matter but the scary ones will be more fun to right about (but yours is very details so it will be fun getting into the book.)

  39. @BoneChi11er Also, it feels like were making a bunch of SCP's

    nah this is more of a contest to see who can create beasts and monsters well enough to be put into my bestiary.

  40. Edited 7 years ago by BoneChi11er

    You're making a bestiary? How many monster do you have?

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